Thanks, friend!
Yes, when I read about haikus I understood that it is often built up on contrasts or turning points and so on. So I am trying to experiment with that just a little, to see how it turns out. Glad you liked it. 🙂 xo
Aah the Florida sun!! I have felt that myself on my skin. It seems strong enough to burn and melt away many a problem! 🙂
But not if you watch the sort of “noir” / dark drama series “Bloodline”. It is set in Florida… dark Family stuff/ secrets… 🙂
Oooh. It starts with hope then deflates us. Lovely write. Much emotion for a little Haiku
Thanks, friend!
Yes, when I read about haikus I understood that it is often built up on contrasts or turning points and so on. So I am trying to experiment with that just a little, to see how it turns out. Glad you liked it. 🙂 xo
There are so many people writing Haikus but the true feel of this form has been lost. With that said, you do it so well.
I see what you mean. And thank you. It is a nice pastime. 🙂
Lonely Author said it perfectly!
Thanks DWM! 🙂
Beautiful. I’m hoping the Florida sun will be strong enough. 😊
Aah the Florida sun!! I have felt that myself on my skin. It seems strong enough to burn and melt away many a problem! 🙂
But not if you watch the sort of “noir” / dark drama series “Bloodline”. It is set in Florida… dark Family stuff/ secrets… 🙂
💜xo
Sad but Beautiful! ~~dru~~
https://saywhatumean2say.com/2014/02/13/for-cyants/
Thank you! Glad you liked it. 🙂